Elizabeth Rose

Serendipity: a life lived in words

Serendipity is...

A showcase of work by elizabeth murray; short stories, articles, haiku, flash fiction, poetry, dialogue, and experiments. Like what you see? Contact me. I could be writing for you.

Real Writers Group

This is the page for people who welcome the opportunity to have another pair of eyes to review their work honestly and with integrity. The aim? To help us all improve our work.

This is something a little different. Its not posting online; sometimes you dont get any feedback and sometimes this is considered as being published and holds you back.

This is concentrated, honest redrafting which will give you another perspective (well, two in fact!). You swap work with another person and you give the piece you receive some serious consideration. You add comments and suggestions; positive or constructive. Then you return each others work and let me know how it went.

How this works:

1. Read the details of the members below and select who you would like to review your work

2. Send me your piece of work, along with details of who you would like it to be sent to

3. I will act as the go between and will send you a piece of their work in return

4. I will also review all pieces so that you have two sets of eyes sending comments

5. once completed, the work is returned, and you send me some feedback on your reviewer

It´s simple…it´s different, but we could make it work. Another person´s feedback is invaluable. Let´s make the most of it.